I'd say the 3X should be first. I think when the standard says the X 'may' be used it's talking about using X instead of dimensioning each one or saying 3 places. As such my understanding is that if using the X it should be in front of the dimension.
UN threads in the US are covered by ASME B1.1-2003. According to section 6 the way the thread is called out is perfectly legal to this standard.
6.1...The nominal size is the basic major diameter and is specified as the fractional diameter, screw number or their decimal equivalent. Where decimal equivalents are used for size callout, they shall be shown in four place decimals (omitting the cipher in the fourth place) for fractional sizes, and in three places for number sizes...
Now the problem may be that most drawings in the US don’t actually reference B1.1 so almost no one actually knows what spec is controlling the threads and seem to rely on Machineries or similar;-). Seriously thought ASME Y14.6 which is referenced by 14.5 says:
3.2 Thread Specification
In the U.S. the name and number of the controlling thread standard is frequently omitted from the drawing. Reference is made instead to the designation symbols of the standard, such as series symbols and class symbols. To avoid misunderstanding, it is recommended that the controlling organization and thread standard be specified or otherwise reference on the drawing.
I just turned the page and 14.6 section 3.2.1.3 actually suggests that just the number size shouldn’t be shown, but if used should be followed by the decimal in parenthesis (we do this). This is a slight mis-match to B1.1 which seems to say you can just have the number. The copy of 14.6 I have is 2001 although 14.5M-1994 references the 1978 edition.
Either way though, the thread designation you have would appear to be legal assuming the drawing somehow references, directly or indirectly (e.g. by calling up 14.5 in the title block etc.), 14.6 or B1.1.
Now if these standards aren’t referenced in any way then arguably you can do what the heck you like, which is why I’m a stickler for somehow referencing any invoked standards.
KENAT, probably the least qualified checker you'll ever meet...