raa1978,
Not sure how to answer this diplomatically.
A large part of my role is reviewing clients or contractors ASME IX welding procedures and if all my customers put those PQR/WPSs on the internet and had them reviewed/ amended for free I would be out of a job.
After a quick review I can find 14 significant errors - however, a proper review of a WPS cannot be achieved without a copy of the relevant PQR.
A good idea is to try and purchase a copy of CASTI Guidebook to ASME Section IX Welding Qualifications - much better for you to learn yourself than have someone write the WPS for you,
Regards,
Kiwi