Quite possibly on a machine of that size you physically can't get any of the connections wrong, but as posted above, they should be checked.
Quoting from my Morganite book "Carbon Brushes and Electrical Machines", on the causes of sparking:
Brush mounting and Maintenance:
sticking in holders, too loose in holders (normally about 0.2mm clearance in the brushbox),
clearance to commutator too large (esp. is comm has been frequently machined, typ. clearance should be 1.5 to 3.5mm), poor brush bedding, incorrect pressures.
Machine adjustment:
brush position, interpole strength
Mechanical fault:
commutator out of round (typ. max TIR say 0.001" on a newly
turned comm), lifted bar esp. during running (seen as unusual bar marking), machine out of balance, worn bearings, comm undercutting incorrect.
Electrical fault:
Comm riser joints, armature fault (again, seen as unusual bar marking).
Of course particular designs of dc motor never commutate particularly well, especially for the high speed (weak field) condition, but you can live with it. But if your sparking includes audible spitting from the trailing edge accompanied by fairly rapid deterioration in commutator condition and smoked brush faces/edges, then something is obviously wrong. Did this machine previously run without sparking? What is the commutator temperature after a test (shouldn't exceed 120°C, note that when measured after shutdown, it can go up a little before it starts to go down).
Why the interpole gap change? This is usually left unaltered as it is very difficult to set the interpoles by trial and error. The ideal interpole setting can be different for different operating points. When a new dc motor design is first tested the interpoles are set using black bands tests, using buck and boost of the interpole currents. Not a particularly easy test to set up (you need a large dc power supply) and it is time-consuming, but it is an effective way of arriving at the correct combination of interpole gap, tip shape and number of turns.
What is the commutator appearance?
Never heard of platinum coating a commutator, I wouldn't bother if I were you.