I haven't read all of those in full, but a few things come out.
1) They were written 20 years ago so whilst the physical issues won't go away, the growth of renewable electricity has risen dramatically
2) Most / many people recognise that the climate is changing very rapidly and doing nothing is not an option open to humanity
3) They are concentrating too much IMO on total change from methane / Oil to hydrogen. That's going to take 50 years or more, so the portents of doom on this are rather overblown.
4) We all need to accept that the era of cheap energy is over and costs will increase.
5) In reality the extractive industries for gas and oil have had it very good as the cost of the energy extracted from the ground has been under priced for decades, but all good things come to an end, literally and metaphorically
6) I don't think anyone other than complete nutters is saying anything other than we need to transition to a lower carbon based economy within the next 10 to 20 years. Saying hydrogen isn't going to part of that mix is unrealistic.
So yes, Hydrogen needs to be manufactured and there are losses in that process from electricity or methane cracking which will result in higher prices for energy. It's also not as easy to move around as methane and has an annoying tendency to catch fire or explode. But rather than just say it's not the answer, people against it need to say what they think the alternative is. Electricity is the main one for sure, but again, the transition from where we are now in terms of electricity usage vs methane or Oil burning is not easy either, both in terms of generation of "clean" electricity or storage or reinforcing the electrical grid system. In that sense Hydrogen does offer a reasonable path to generate less carbon relatively quickly.
I think quite a lot of the projects I'm working on now to transport hydrogen won't see the light of day, but there are quite a few which have much better economics and are much more realistic, generally those based around transition of industrial usage of methane or coke into usage of hydrogen instead, either with CO2 sequestration or use of "green" hydrogen.
Hydrogen is coming and despite its many issues, we had all better get used to it.
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