I am trying to guess why do you want to use the note instead of applying proper GD&T callouts? Is it because of difference in ASME & ISO interpretations of position tolerance or are you just afraid that a reader of your print may not understand standard symbology?
Regardless of your answer, I would say the note needs improvement - like adding diameter symbol in front of 0.1 value (just as an example), if the zones are going to be cylinders - and even with that, this will merely control relationship between each 3-step bore and corresponding dia. 30 cylinders, but will not control mutual angular relationship of bores. If we assume for a moment that the goal is to have the bores inclined at approximately 30 degrees, your note will not control this at all - there might as well be actual 40 or 50 degrees angle between bores and the note will not have any control over it.
Therefore I would strongly recommend use of symbols with the remark though that probably it will not be easy to cover both ASME & ISO interpretations of positional tolerances simultaneously. These are, by defintion, different geometrical requirements.