It looks like there's no entry chamfer for the o-ring around the nut's nose, so it may get torn during installation. Leave room for a backup ring or two in the o-ring groove, too. I assume the stem seal is just not shown.
While you're increasing the nut diameter and the body diameter to accommodate the entry chamfer, you can also provide a positive stop so the nut stops with the seats in the perfect position, and the threads just shy of bottoming.
As it stands now, the only depth stop you've got is the end of the nut and body threads. It's possible for that to work, if you whirl both threads so you have blunt ends on both, and full control over the exact position of the blunt ends.
The drilled hole at the bottom of the ball keyway allows line pressure to reach the stem cavity; was that intentional?
Mike Halloran
Pembroke Pines, FL, USA