What does this adj describe?
What does this adj describe?
(OP)
Hi,
I am looking through a technical document and saw this sentence.
"The team uploads all necessary files into their {name_of_directory} directory."
When I first read this I thought "their" referred to "the team"'s directory. (There is a directory that this team of people has while another team has another directory). However, I think "their" may have referenced the "files"' directory.
My guess is the sentence can and should be worded better. However, is there a grammatical standard that would define what "their" is referring to? "The team" is the subject and "files" is the direct object (am I right?). So would the preposition, "into their directory" at the end necessarily go with either the subject or direct object?
Or, from a technical standpoint can a file ever "own" a directory such that you can call it "its" directory? I think they would mean the directory that the files are destined for ... the {such_and_such} directory.
Help is appreciated!
I am looking through a technical document and saw this sentence.
"The team uploads all necessary files into their {name_of_directory} directory."
When I first read this I thought "their" referred to "the team"'s directory. (There is a directory that this team of people has while another team has another directory). However, I think "their" may have referenced the "files"' directory.
My guess is the sentence can and should be worded better. However, is there a grammatical standard that would define what "their" is referring to? "The team" is the subject and "files" is the direct object (am I right?). So would the preposition, "into their directory" at the end necessarily go with either the subject or direct object?
Or, from a technical standpoint can a file ever "own" a directory such that you can call it "its" directory? I think they would mean the directory that the files are destined for ... the {such_and_such} directory.
Help is appreciated!
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The word "their" is, I believe, not an adjective but a possessive pronoun, in this context. Unfortunately, the author has used it without a clear antecedent. The antecedent is the noun to which "their" refers. In this case, as in many many others, it is not clear whether the pronoun refers to the files or to the team members. Use of Pronouns which do not have clear antecedents are an all too frequent mistake and make the sentence ambiguous.
good luck
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yourRebam98's additional information that the "team" has a directory assigned toitthe team that is separate from a directory assigned to another team.However I would take Rebam98's comment a bit further: the "team" itself cannot upload the files. In the end, a team member will need to take action to upload the files into the common directory. As written
thisthe sentence seems to be a good candidate for the old saw about Everybody, Somebody, Nobody and Anybody:Note: As shown by my intentional edits above, I found it very easy to slip into possessive pronouns in writing the post. Because the post was on the ambiguity of possessive pronouns, I found myself going back and editing for clarity and realized that the fact that I had to edit said a lot about the imprecisenss of my writing style. I'm pretty sure I'm not the culprit behind Rebam98's sentence; however, thanks for bringing my attention to the fact that I need to watch how I word my sentences.
Patricia Lougheed
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unless {name of directory} is a common name, like "personnal", rather than a specific name, like "XYZ".
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If you think of the process of uploading a file, you are taking it from one directory on the local machine and putting it on a different machine, which obviously has a different directory. The "their" refers to which directory to put it in, and in this case, the "team" has their own directory while a different team has theirs. (It is a trunk-branch process).
Indeed, I don't think this is totally obvious. I know this sentence means this because I looked at the process myself. The sentence doesn't stand on its own.
Indeed, it should be "its" directory.
And I agree the "team" doesn't do it, but rather an individual does it.
To make this sentence more clear, perhaps the following ... ?
"The team uploads all necessary files into its directory on the server."
"The team uploads all necessary files into Team A's directory on the server."
"The team uploads all necessary files into its branch directory on the server."
"A member of Team A uploads all necessary files into Team A's (the branch) directory on the server."
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Hokie66,
The singular "their" is acceptable. Such usage is common in Shakespeare, Dickens, Austen, Chaucer, The OED, The King Jame Bible, etc, etc.
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It's very poorly written, because the meaning is only clear if the reader already understands, in which case it's not necessary to write the sentence.
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Businesses are so global now, more non-native english speaking people are invovled than native english speaking people. This kind of "issues" will continue,languages and usage of words, etc. will keep changing. So purists needs to put their technical hats on, think harder,use commnon sense and move on or be prepared to suffer from heartburns for no real reason.
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Now I am in doubt, same thing happened in school, though, I was happily going to become an accountant but somebody put this frakin' ChEngg bug in my mind, I doubted and succumbed
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Actually, I did figure the process out, by thinking on my own. I in no way "picked on" the author anywhere in my original post. I was only trying to figure out what the sentence meant.
I took the document and the sentence to other coworkers and they agreed it was poorly written. It was an English person who wrote it. I am editing the whole document both for clarity and accuracy as several technical things were wrong.
Speaking English properly is a virtue not a vice. Deciding that people need to "think harder" to wade through mumbled, incoherent language would take us backwards not forwards. In any case, this is a grammar forum, where people dedicate time to speaking properly, so maybe you are in the wrong place.
Thanks to all others for replies!
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"Team A uploads all necessary files to the {name_of_directory} folder on the server."
Is this clear?
In looking at the sentence and the process further, "their" referred to "files." They use a configuration management program, which permanently links the files on the local computer to the files on the server. The software compares the local version and the server version for differences. When they "upload" their files, they are saying the local is the better copy and thus the "files" should go to "their" folder.
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I find your rewrite to be perfectly clear.
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"The group puts all the babies into their playpen."
You would imply in this sentence, that the playpen is that of the babies.
However, put it into another context with a similar structure, and you imply differently.
"The group puts all the frogs into their bucket."
Nothing has changed really, except our interpretation. The playpen may be the possession of group, just as easily as the bucket may be the possession of the frogs. Because we are familiar with the two above examples, we "guess" what they mean. And for this reason, I would say they are both logically and linguistically valid.
They both make sense, as does the sentence in question. What isn't clear is the authors intended meaning; this might be down to the rest of the document being omitted, or a poorly written sentence, if I don't understand; the audience hasn't been properly considered - provided I am the intended audience of course, I wouldn't claim authors that write in foreign (to me) languages aren't writing properly!
That said, my language A level (don't know what equivalent is in US, I work in years and not grades haha) was some two years ago! And I may well be corrected on the validity of my suggestions, to which I will not exhibit any surprise!
Isn't English fun?
Cheers folks!
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